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[MOVE THIS DOWN TO A NEW BLOCK; the side by side should be side by side PDF embeds]
[link to the contest AW submitted it to, explain what feedback he was looking for, explain rush job]
Author: Aaron Waite
Genre: realistic fiction
Length: ~4,500 words
Side by side
Key passages from the manuscript, next to the feedback I gave on each.
The manuscript
My feedback
[Excerpt 1 from the manuscript, a few sentences — e.g. the opening.]
[Theme: e.g. Pacing]
[What you noticed and what you suggested, in a few sentences.]
[Excerpt 2 from the manuscript.]
[Theme: e.g. Character motivation]
[What you noticed and what you suggested.]
[Excerpt 3 from the manuscript.]
[Theme: e.g. Structure]
[What you noticed and what you suggested.]
Thanks to Aaron Waite for graciously allowing me to share his work.